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海外留学申请书怎么写?

How to write a strong resume/CV (WITH A TEMPLATE) (Get Accepted to Your Dream University Part #10)

– Hey guys, welcome.
嗨 欢迎大家
Today we’re gonna talk about CVs and resumes,
今天我们要讨论的是履历和简历
specifically for admissions.
尤其是入学申请简历
So if you’re sitting and wondering
如果你坐在那儿思考
what you should do you with your CV, how do you write it,
要怎么做CV 怎样去写
do I need to provide all the documents to
是否需要提供所有的文件
prove everything that you’re mentioning?
来证明你提到的一切呢?
I’m gonna answer all of those questions in this video.
我将会在这个视频里回答所有的问题
So if you’re interested,continue watching.
所以 如果你感兴趣的话 请继续观看
We are going to look at a template
我们接下来要看一个
provided by Stanford University.
由斯坦福大学提供的模板
It’s a template that I’ve used.
这是我用过的一个模板
It’s a template that you should use
也是你可以使用的模板
And it says that for every 10 years of work experience,
这个模板要求你应该将每10年的工作经验
you should have one page of your resume.
做成一页简历
And there is a pretty formal standard
我建议你遵守
that I would advise you to follow.
因为这是一个很正式的标准
Let’s look at this template.
让我们来看一下这个模板
You start with your first and last name.
开头写上你的名字和姓氏
Please don’t play with fonts.
请不要随意添加字体
I know it’s very tempting to
我知道你会忍不住
download some template from the internet
从互联网上下载一些模板
and to use a font that is super creative,
并且使用一些超有创意的字体
but unless you’re a designer,
但是 除非你是设计师
I would stick to something really formal,
不然我还是坚持让你用很正式的
really easy to read.
很容易阅读的字体
Sometimes fonts make it harder to read.
因为有些字体会增加阅读困难
So please stick to this.
所以 请坚持使用正式的字体
So you have first and last name, your telephone number, your email address.
写了名字和姓氏后 下面写上电话号码 电子邮箱地址
They say use Stanford address, but you don’t have it.
他们说要用斯坦福大学的电子邮箱地址 但你没有
Again, we’re looking at Stanford’s guidelines.
我们再来看一下斯坦福大学的指南是怎么说的
Then you’re going with a summary.
接下来你要写一个摘要
Summary paragraph highlights your accomplishments,
摘要段落要突出你的成就
experience tuned to a target job role.
与目标职位相关的经验
Key accomplishments or skills can be included with bullets.
关键的成就或技能 可以用项目符号来排版
If you’re applying to your master’s program,
如果你打算申请硕士项目
it’s very important to mention here’s someth
那么提到一些关于
ing that’s relevant to your master’s program.
硕士项目的事情是很重要的
Maybe you’ve one a research on a topic that you’re gonna study,
或许你对将要学习的领域有所研究
maybe you have some work experience,
或许你有一些工作经验
maybe you have some awards that are worth mentioning.
又或许你有一些值得一提的奖项
I have my CV ready to download together with my book. The link will be below.
你可以下载我的简历和我的书 链接在视频简介里
So basically I mentioned all of the awards
基本上我提到了所有
that I think are worth mentioning,
我认为值得提及的奖项
like Opportunity Award by the U.S. Government
例如 美国政府的Opportunity Award
and DAD by German Award.
德国政府的DAD Award
And some Olympus that I won,
我获得的一些奥赛奖
some progress that I made with my company,
还有我在公司里取得的一些成绩
’cause it was relevant to whatever I was doing
因为这与过去我所做的事
and I was applying to my master’s program.
以及我正在申请的硕士项目有关
Then you go to your experience.
然后 到了经验部分
You start with something recent.
从最近的事情开始写
And if you don’t have any work experience,
如果你没有任何工作经验
this section is replaced by your education,
那么这部分就用你的教育经历代替
where you go more in depth about your education.
这里要更深入地描述你的教育经历
But if you have some experience,
但是如果你有一些工作经验
if you’ve done some internship,
如果你做过一些实习
it’s really, really worth mentioning it here.
这是非常 非常值得一提的
You go with your organization name, city and state.
这里写上你的公司名称 城市 和州
One line organization description
用一行来写公司说明
don’t include for recognized firms.
但是不用写大家都认识的公司
So if everyone knows what Mercedes Benz does,
比如 如果所有人都知道梅赛德斯奔驰是做什么的
and everybody knows, you don’t have to describe.
像这种所有人都知道的事 就不用说明了
If it’s a smaller company, less more known,
如果它是一个规模较小 知名度较低的公司
then give a one liner of what it does.
那就用一行来简单介绍一下它的业务
LinguaTrip is a study abroad booking platform, whatever.
比如LinguaTrip是一个海外留学预订平台 诸如此类的话
Your job title, what were you responsible for?
这里写你过去的职位头衔 你负责什么?
If you were a sales person,
如果你曾经是销售员
don’t tell them that you were selling stuff,’cause that’s obvious.
那么不要说你在卖东西 因为这很明显
Instead focus on brief description of accomplishments
而是要注意简单地说明你所取得的成就
with concrete actions and quantifiable results.
给出具体的行动和可量化的结果
I always tell you, numbers, they play a magic game,
我总是告诉你 数字 它们有魔力
and they play a magic trick with your application.
它们在你的申请书里会起到神奇的作用
The plan was to generate $3000 in revenues, I generated $10,000
比如 原计划是创收3000美元 我创收了10000美元
and I was awarded number one sales person
而且在2018年的第四季度
in my department in 2018 quarter four.
我荣获了部门的销售冠军
Typically, three five bullet points.
通常写3-5个要点
Include budget, number of people managed.
包括预算 管理人员数量
If you managed people, please write that down.
如果你管理过人员 请写下来
Like, managed team of 10.
比如 你管理过一个10人的团队
If you’ve done something extra, I would always mention it.
如果做了额外的一些事情 我也经常会提到
Like if, as part of your sales job,
比如 作为销售工作的一部分
you went to a conference in New York
你代表你的公司
to represent your company, please put it here as well.
参加了一个纽约的会议 同样把它写在这里
Or maybe organized, you organized a conference.
又或许是组织 你组织了一个会议
Like mention that, ’cause it’s also really important.
同样也提一下 因为这也很重要
And it talks about your experience.
这部分讨论的是你的经验
Then, mention your previous jobs if you have them.
然后 提一下你以前的工作 如果你有的话
Again, in the same manner,
和前面描述工作经验的方式一样
but you don’t have to be so specific.
但是不用这么具体
You don’t have to go into too many details about your previous jobs.
你不必描述太多以前的工作细节
‘Cause what matters is like your recent experience.
因为重要的是你最近的经历
If there’s something notable,
如果在你以前的工作中
like please mention it for the previous jobs as well.
有一些值得注意的事 也请提一下
If you have anything older than 10 years,
如果你有任何超过10年的经验
but I think the majority if you won’t,
但是我认为大多数人都没有
they offer you to create like an additional experience section
你可以创建一个像 额外工作经验 这样的部分
where you would put organization name and title.
在这里写上公司名称和头衔
Then we’re gonna go to education.
接下来 就到了教育部分
So basically, this is what they’re offering
基本上这是他们提供给
to Stanford graduates to use,
斯坦福毕业生使用的模板
but it’s a good manner to use this
但是 用它来申请斯坦福大学
to apply to Stanford or to apply to any other university.
或者其他任何一所大学 都是很好的方式
‘Cause again, if you are taking the highest standards,
因为如果你采用的是最高标准
I’m sure other universities would appreciate that.
那么我确信其他的大学也会认可这个标准的
In terms of your education,
在教育方面
you write your degree institution, degree name,
写上你的学位机构 学位名称
subject area, year.
学科领域 年份
I would also write your GPA
我还建议你写下GPA
and tell them what’s the scale.
告诉他们你的分数
So for example, I wrote five out of five,
举个例子 我写了5/5
so that they know that five out of five.
这样他们就会知道我的排名是5/5了
And if you were like top 5% of class
如果你排在班级的前5%
or something like that, or like a class manager,
或者你是其他的 比如班级管理者这类人员
if something like that exists in your country,
如果你的国家里有这种职位的话
you can also write that down.
你也可以写下来
‘Cause again, this is more like professional,
再说一遍 这个模板看起来更加专业
’cause this is more intended for graduates,
因为它更适合毕业生
but I love this structure.
但是我喜欢这个模板的结构
This is why we’re talking about it.
这就是我们讨论它的原因
And I used it for all of my applications.
我把它用在我所有的申请中
All of my students use it for their applications.
我所有的学生 都把它用在他们的申请中
One pager maximum.
最多一页
Really easy, like you can copy paste whatever’s here.
真的很简单 你可以复制粘贴文件里的任何内容
The link will be below to download this file.
下载文件的链接在视频简介里
For education, I would write everything down,
对于教育 我会写下所有东西
like your Bachelor’s, if you have it.
比如如果你有本科学位 就写下来
Your additional education,
如果你有额外教育
maybe you’ve done study abroad
也许在高中或者初中的时候
in your high school and your middle school,
你出国留学过
with just GPAs, just mention them there and that’s it.
对这种教育 只写上GPA 只要提一下就行了
And then something additional like language competencies,community service.
然后到了其他附加的部分 比如语言能力 社区服务
In my case, I mentioned languages, travel, and ballet, and like…
以我为例 我提到了语言 旅行 芭蕾和……
Whatever you like to do.
任何你喜欢做的事情都可以
That would add some additional information about you as a personality.
这部分给出了关于个性的一些附加信息
A very important question,
一个很重要的问题是
do you need to provide all the documents
你需要提供所有的文件
supporting whatever you wrote there?
来支持你所写的内容吗?
No you don’t, but it should sound realistic.
不 不需要 但你写的内容听起来要符合现实
If you’re telling them you’re the winner of all the Olympiads,
如果你告诉他们 你是所有奥赛的冠军
you’re a Ph. D. at the age of 23,
你是一个23岁的博士
you’ve done this, this, and that,
你做了这个 这个和那个
they’re gonna be suspicious, they’re not gonna believe you.
他们就会怀疑你 不相信你
And I’ve talked to admissions officer
我和一所顶尖大学的
from one of the top universities,
招生官聊过
and she says,”Yes, we actually.”
她说 是的 我们实际上
Especially for like, oh what she said?
尤其是对于 呃 她说什么来着
Like for some countries from Asia,
尤其是对于亚洲的一些国家
they see a lot of like something that looks like fraud to them.
他们看到了许多像欺骗一样的内容
There are too many accomplishments that they cannot verify.
有太多他们没办法核实的成就了
When they Google company, it looks like it doesn’t exist.
当他们谷歌一个公司的时候 它就像不存在一样
When they Google an award, it looks like it doesn’t exist.
当他们谷歌一个奖项时 它也像不存在一样
They can not verify
他们没办法核实这些信息
and it looks like too many accomplishments
而且对于一个20岁的人来说
for a 20 year old person.
成就似乎有点太多了
And they just disregard the application
于是他们只好无视这些申请
because they think you are misleading them.
因为他们认为你在欺骗他们
And this is something that you should just learn about America in general.
你应该大体上了解一下关于美国的一些事
Everyone wants to believe you.
那就是 每个人都想要相信你
When you come to the office,
当你来到办公室时
you don’t bring like papers with you.
你不用带文件一类的东西
You just raise your hand and you swear
你只要举起手 然后发誓
that you’re telling the truth.
你说的都是事实 就行了
When we got married in San Francisco,
当我们在旧金山结婚时
they were like”Were you married before?” We were like,”No.”
他们会问 你以前结过婚吗?我们回答 没有
In Russia, they would tell us like bring all of your papers.
在俄罗斯 他们会要求我们带上所有的文件
In America, they would be like, “Can you swear that you’ve never married before?”
在美国 他们只会问 你能发誓你从来没有结过婚吗
We’re like,”Yes, we can.”
我们回答 是的 我们可以
So this is it.
这样就行了
But if you are lying,
但是如果你撒谎
there’s something you’re intentionally like misleading people,
你故意欺骗人们
then they would just disregard your application.
他们就会无视你的申请
You don’t wanna do that.
你不会想这么做的
So, no, there’s no need to provide additional proof,
所以 不需要 你不需要提供额外的证据
but yes, you need to be honest.
但是 你要诚实
And if you haven’t won anything,
如果你没有赢过任何奖项
don’t write it down.
就不要写下来
Find something else.
去找别的东西来写
Maybe if you realize, if you’re looking at the CV,
如果你在看我的CV的话 你可能会意识到
and you’re like oh my God I don’t have anything that she’s mentioning,
你会想 天哪 她提到的东西我都没有
I don’t have work experience, I don’t have this, this, and that. Okay,
我没有工作经验 我没有这个 这个和那个
if you’re not applying to top university,
好吧 如果你申请的不是顶尖大学
maybe you don’t even need it.
或许你根本就不需要这些
If you’re ready to pay out of pocket,
如果你准备自费
maybe you don’t even need it.
或许也根本不需要这些
But if you’re looking for financial aid,
但是如果你在寻求资助
if you’re looking at high ranking universities,
如果你考虑的是排名靠前的大学
that maybe take a year off, not off,
你可以选择休学一年 不是休学
but take a year where you would go
可以选择花上一年 在你想申请的领域里
and get some work experience.
获得一些工作经验
Maybe invest more time into conferences.
可能是在会议上投入更多的时间
Maybe invest more time into publications.
也可能是在出版物上投入更多时间
Like do something that would make your resume stand out.
总之 做一些会让你的简历更出彩的事情
And this is why I’m doing this thing.
这就是我做这件事的原因
This is why I’m recording this video,
这就是我录制这个视频的原因
so you could take action in advance.
你可以提前采取行动
Not like three months before your deadline.
而不是在截止日期前三个月才开始行动
This is super important. So,
这超级重要 所以
look at the application.
看着这个申请
You can Google some sample CVs.
你可以谷歌一些简单的CV
Download the template.
把模板下载下来
You can download my CV together with my book
你可以下载我的CV和我的书
where I’m talking about my admissions journey.
书里写了我的申请入学过程
All of the links will be below.
所有的链接都在视频简介里
Thank you so much for watching this video.
感谢大家观看这个视频
I hope this content was useful.
希望这些内容对你有所帮助
If you have any more questions,
如果你有任何问题
please chat in comments below.
请在下方的评论区里讨论
Ask questions, ask other peoples’ questions
可以提问 可以回答其他人的问题
and I will pick up some very interesting
我将会挑选出一些非常有趣的
and some common ones.
和一些有代表性的评论
If you’re not yet subscribed, hit subscribe
如果你还没有订阅 点击订阅
and I will see you soon in the next videos. Bye bye.
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美女学霸教你用一个模板,写出优秀的留学申请简历。用这个模板,去申请心仪的学校吧!

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